forbiddden_writes

Sneakpeak[ 2 ]:
          	
          	
          	"Let your love once more awaken
          	as a sacred flame in my eyes.
          	Even if it's only to leave again,
          	return—if only to say goodbye."
          	
          	
          	Evelyn scraped across the cold stone floor, her palms raw and trembling, dragging herself forward before the door could slam shut.
          	Bang!
          	The iron-clad wood thundered into place, sealing her in.
          	Darkness swallowed her whole.
          	She hurled her fists against the door, her voice cracking with desperation. "Please! Let me out! Please—" Her cries shattered the silence, then dissolved into the void.
          	No answer.
          	Her sobs grew wild, broken things tearing from her chest. She slumped against the door, forehead pressed to the splintered wood, tears soaking the grain. Her breath hitched in sharp, aching gasps as she slid slowly to the floor, knees pulled to her chest.
          	And then—his voice again. Not from the other side. From within.
          	"You're a burden, Evelyn. A weight around my neck."
          	"Marrying you ruined everything."
          	"I should’ve left you when I had the chance."
          	
          	Each word drove into her like splinters beneath the skin.
          	She shook her head, curling tighter into herself, but the memories wouldn’t stop. They circled like vultures, feasting on what little strength she had left.
          	"Stop," she whispered, rocking gently. "Stop… please…"
          	But the silence had no mercy.
          	And in that dark cell, with only ghosts for company, Evelyn broke.
          	
          	Her vision blurred. The air felt thinner.
          	The last thing she remembered was the wood under her skin—rough, cold, final—and the ghost of his voice in her ear:
          	"You took everything."
          	Then the world slipped away.
          	Her body slumped sideways, motionless on the floor. Unconscious. Broken.

eladavis

I’m so scared and sad for Evelyn 
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forbiddden_writes

Sneakpeak[ 2 ]:
          
          
          "Let your love once more awaken
          as a sacred flame in my eyes.
          Even if it's only to leave again,
          return—if only to say goodbye."
          
          
          Evelyn scraped across the cold stone floor, her palms raw and trembling, dragging herself forward before the door could slam shut.
          Bang!
          The iron-clad wood thundered into place, sealing her in.
          Darkness swallowed her whole.
          She hurled her fists against the door, her voice cracking with desperation. "Please! Let me out! Please—" Her cries shattered the silence, then dissolved into the void.
          No answer.
          Her sobs grew wild, broken things tearing from her chest. She slumped against the door, forehead pressed to the splintered wood, tears soaking the grain. Her breath hitched in sharp, aching gasps as she slid slowly to the floor, knees pulled to her chest.
          And then—his voice again. Not from the other side. From within.
          "You're a burden, Evelyn. A weight around my neck."
          "Marrying you ruined everything."
          "I should’ve left you when I had the chance."
          
          Each word drove into her like splinters beneath the skin.
          She shook her head, curling tighter into herself, but the memories wouldn’t stop. They circled like vultures, feasting on what little strength she had left.
          "Stop," she whispered, rocking gently. "Stop… please…"
          But the silence had no mercy.
          And in that dark cell, with only ghosts for company, Evelyn broke.
          
          Her vision blurred. The air felt thinner.
          The last thing she remembered was the wood under her skin—rough, cold, final—and the ghost of his voice in her ear:
          "You took everything."
          Then the world slipped away.
          Her body slumped sideways, motionless on the floor. Unconscious. Broken.

eladavis

I’m so scared and sad for Evelyn 
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forbiddden_writes

SNEAKPEAK: 
          
          Jason's voice dropped like poison. "You have blood on your hands."
          
          Harry's mocking smile faltered — only for a breath.
          
          Jason grinned wide, sensing the crack. "You think you're untouchable. But deep down, you know you're not. You didn't just frame me. You destroyed everything. You killed the most precious person in the life of the woman you call your mother. "
          
          Harry's entire body went rigid.
          
          Harry dropped the receiver.
          
          Jason didn't stop. "Now Anne is dead too. Guess the truth was too much for her heart. And that blood's on your hands too."
          
          Glass cracked — not literally, but from the sheer force of the moment.
          
          Harry launched forward, fists slamming against the metal barrier between them. "Don't. You. Dare. Drag. My Mum."
          
          "Or what?" Jason spat, standing too. "You'll kill me like you did her?"
          
          The door burst open. The officers stormed in. Two rushed to Harry, holding him back.
          
          "Mr. Styles — TIME'S OVER!"
          
          A twisted smile slithered across his lips.
          
          "Or should I even call you Harry?" Jason hissed, eyes dancing with sick amusement. "Or is it Edward now? Or are you even sure who you are anymore?"
          
          Harry froze. His entire body, stiff as a board, suddenly stopped resisting the guards.
          
          His heart dropped.
          
          Jason chuckled darkly at the stunned silence that followed. "Oh, that got your attention, didn't it?" He cocked his head. "I wonder if Evelyn knows. That the man she sleeps beside every night — the man she clings to — isn't even who she thinks he is."
          
          Harry's breath caught.
          
          Jason's voice turned venomous, lips curling in disgust. "Does she know she shares her bed with a murderer? A ghost of a man who's buried his truth so deep under layers of rage, lies, and fake names... he probably can't even recognize himself anymore."

eladavis

The suspence!!! 
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Sunnydays82

@ forbiddden_writes  Girl, what is even happening?? 
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forbiddden_writes

SNEAKPEAK:
          
          “Hey,” she called softly, but he didn’t turn.
          
          “Mm?” he answered distractedly, trying to squeeze her shoes into the side pocket of the bag. “We’ll leave early tomorrow. If we take the back route, we’ll skip traffic...”
          
          “Harry…” she said again, firmer this time.
          
          He looked up, instantly reading something in her face. “What’s wrong?”
          
          She hesitated. Her fingers tugged at the hem of her T-shirt.
          
          “I… I think I need to tell you something. It’s probably nothing. Or maybe it is something. I don’t know...”
          
          “Evelyn,” he said gently, standing up and walking over to her. “Tell me.”
          
          She bit her lip. “There was a little blood. Just now. In the washroom.”
          
          His brows drew together slightly. “Are you...hurt? Did I...”
          
          “No! No, it’s not that.” She placed a hand on his chest. “It wasn’t from that. I mean, I don’t think so. It didn’t hurt. It’s just… it’s not even close to my period. Like, not even remotely the date.”
          
          Harry’s expression shifted, the teasing gone now, replaced by concern. “Okay. So what are you thinking?”
          
          “I’m not sure,” she said quietly. “Maybe I’m overthinking, but… could it be…”
          
          Harry’s thumb traced absentminded circles on the back of her hand as they sat on the edge of the bed, quiet for a moment after Evelyn told him about the blood. His mind raced, though his voice remained steady.
          
          “Could it be… from sex?” he asked cautiously, glancing at her face for a reaction. “I mean, was I too rough?”
          
          Evelyn’s eyes widened slightly, and she shook her head firmly. “No! Harry, no. It wasn’t like that. You weren’t… it wasn’t painful. Not even a bit.” She gave a small, reassuring squeeze to his hand. “You didn’t hurt me. You could never.”
          
          “But it wasn’t your first time either,” he said, brows drawn. “So a tear doesn’t make much sense…”
          
          “I know,” she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. “That’s why I’m confused.”

forbiddden_writes

SNEAKPEAK:
          Then—
          She collided into two figures.
          
          Men.
          
          She stumbled back, but they caught her arms—too quickly.
          
          “Well, well,” one of them sneered, eyes crawling over her bare shoulders. “What’ve we got here?”
          
          “Lost little lamb,” the other one added, grinning. “Ain’t she a fresh one?”
          
          Evelyn’s stomach dropped.
          
          “I...I’m sorry, I was just looking for...there was a power cut...I need the manager...please...”
          
          “Oh, we’ll take care of you,” one said, stepping closer, breath reeking of alcohol.
          
          Her chest tightened. “Let go of me,” she whispered, trying to twist away.
          
          “Don't be like that,” he said, brushing her arm. “You lookin’ for business? We’ll pay double. Real decent girl like you...”
          
          “DON’T TOUCH ME!”
          
          She shoved past them and bolted, barefoot and breathless, stumbling toward the stairs. Her heart pounded as she turned a corner—

chealsea_boots12

@forbiddden_writes sneak peaks really get me , they makes me more eager for reading the chapter !
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forbiddden_writes

SNEAKPEAK: 
          
          
          As the final hymn played and the priest raised his hands for the closing blessing, the chapel was enveloped in silence. Candles flickered in gentle rhythm with the soft patter of rain on stained-glass windows.
          
          Harry sat still, unmoving.
          
          Until his phone vibrated. Once. He ignored it.
          
          It buzzed again.
          
          And again.
          
          Gemma glanced sideways at him, brows furrowing.
          
          Harry quietly reached into his pocket, silenced it, and slipped it back in.
          
          But it buzzed once more—this time longer. Urgent.
          
          He leaned over to Niall and whispered, "Watch Evelyn." Then, with a subtle nod, he rose and slipped out of the pew, his footsteps silent on the floor.
          
          He stepped out into the hallway, the funeral door closing behind him. The rain on the roof was louder here, and the echo of muffled prayers made the moment feel both sacred and surreal.
          
          He looked at the screen: IVF Care & Wellness Centre.
          
          His heart sank. He swiped to answer.
          
          "Mr. Styles?" came the soft, clinical voice on the other end.
          
          "Yes."
          
          "This is Dr. Patil from IVF Care. I know this is a difficult time, but the results just came in. I thought you'd want to know as soon as possible."
          
          Harry's grip tightened. "Tell me."

chealsea_boots12

@forbiddden_writes  is it harry's mum or someone in woods family  ?
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Paraskeve4

@forbiddden_writes wait who passed? I think I know……
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