forestchord

When I was eleven or twelve, I wrote the POV of the girl who makes a bus her hideaway and secret clubhouse of sorts. Her love of imaginative stories is mine as well, and now that I've grown up I thought I'd see where she ended up as well. I would love to hear constructive feedback on this piece, it's the first short story in a long time that I've written all the way to completion! https://www.wattpad.com/story/214062860

forestchord

When I was eleven or twelve, I wrote the POV of the girl who makes a bus her hideaway and secret clubhouse of sorts. Her love of imaginative stories is mine as well, and now that I've grown up I thought I'd see where she ended up as well. I would love to hear constructive feedback on this piece, it's the first short story in a long time that I've written all the way to completion! https://www.wattpad.com/story/214062860