forevermore20

Thx and trust me I will continue writing I am GLAD u love my book

Honest opinion of your book so far... I love love your plot line and the interacting ideas you have for your readers!!! Having people submit their descriptions and their mates descriptions was pure genius butttttt (there's always a but) I think you need an editor to help you process your story it's lacking time and detail.if you take the time to reread it I think this story would be absolutely amazing!!! You have to have the most creative mind I've ever encountered. If you need help let me know!!! I'd love to help out... I hope you continue writing

Needs to be longer 

We'll your book was okay