@freethebirds I think that you did a great job on your book and even though it's the first chapter it was good but you need to make sure that you capitalize your I's. Overall it's a great start to the book and I will definitely read the whole book :)
@freethebirds I think that you did a great job on your book and even though it's the first chapter it was good but you need to make sure that you capitalize your I's. Overall it's a great start to the book and I will definitely read the whole book :)