@sugarbelle- well, sorry to take so long to see your message from July, but you r writing a story w/ a mysterious, interesting character, Naomi. Nora's OK, but Naomi just keeps me guessing. Shiloh does, too. Thanx for sharing your talent. But, getting updates is like pulling teeth from you. You must b really busy. Not so much criticizing--just really into the story. If you write back, u can call me Tracey; I look too much like a guy to not chuckle at "girly". Anyway thanx for replying , & I think I'll b a "follower". (Why can't we be called "fans"?)