fovena

Trying to decide if I want the police to question Tabitha in the hospital as soon as she's awake or wait until she's home and then have them question her. Ugh. Such a difficult decision. :P

fovena

I totally understand. I went back and decided to move the interrogation to a later part of the story. Simply had a better flow that way. Didn't mean to confuse.
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idiosyncratic_mariah

@fovena But.... you had her dad say he saw the police already question her in your last update.... And, as much as I love your writing, I got immensely confused in a section of your latest update. I went back and commented where I was confused. My goal isn't to be rude, just to point out that it didn't quite make sense in my brain, that way you may be able to see it, too.
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Jumppy

Are you still writing? Can you update? Please? ;w; there are people who read your story, even there are only a few of us. Sooo pleaseeee. QwQ

fovena

@Jumppy hey! Thank you so much for the feedback. Landed in a bit of a rut. My main job ended for the summer and I've been on the hunt for a good summer job. As soon as my son goes to stay with his father for the summer I'll have lots more free time. Just trying to get all the summer fun out of the way before I don't see him until September. Haha.
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fovena

Trying to decide if I want the police to question Tabitha in the hospital as soon as she's awake or wait until she's home and then have them question her. Ugh. Such a difficult decision. :P

fovena

I totally understand. I went back and decided to move the interrogation to a later part of the story. Simply had a better flow that way. Didn't mean to confuse.
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idiosyncratic_mariah

@fovena But.... you had her dad say he saw the police already question her in your last update.... And, as much as I love your writing, I got immensely confused in a section of your latest update. I went back and commented where I was confused. My goal isn't to be rude, just to point out that it didn't quite make sense in my brain, that way you may be able to see it, too.
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