frara_dreemur

Hey guys, so I’ve started a book and I’d like some opinions on it, of how it is and how I can improve. So if you all could read it and give me opinions, I’d be really thankful!!!

frara_dreemur

I have it that way on the word doc that I pasted it from...... did it do that glitch thing where it gets rid of my paragraph spaces????
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kwydove

I’d recommend putting them in sentences? Unless it’s a style choice, just gets hard to read when everything is in one whole paragraph. Hope this helps (:
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frara_dreemur

Hey guys, so I’ve started a book and I’d like some opinions on it, of how it is and how I can improve. So if you all could read it and give me opinions, I’d be really thankful!!!

frara_dreemur

I have it that way on the word doc that I pasted it from...... did it do that glitch thing where it gets rid of my paragraph spaces????
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kwydove

I’d recommend putting them in sentences? Unless it’s a style choice, just gets hard to read when everything is in one whole paragraph. Hope this helps (:
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frara_dreemur

Hey guys! I just got back from barns and noble and got the journal 3 gravity falls book!!! So I’ll be reading that and then start working on my book again. Also I am so so sorry that I haven’t updated when I’ve promised that I would. Finales and exams got in the way. And since we’re moving again that’s also in the way. But I’ll finally be able to start up my writing again! So hang in there a little longer and thank you so much for reading my book! 

frara_dreemur

Ok so I’m wondering if I should draw a Billdip ship child or not. And if I do should it be boy or girl and who should they look more like? I read a Klance ship story where in that universe one male out of a billion had a womb and could get pregnant. And I was thinking what if that happened with Bill and Dipper? Like. Dipper can get pregnant because we all know for a solid fact that Bill is not the sub. And I was wondering what a kid of theirs would look like...... I need help figuring this one out. 

frara_dreemur

Umm whenever. And sorry for not responding, I didn’t get a notification that you responded and I hardly ever check this thing. 
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frara_dreemur

But I’m starting to think from a billdip story I read that Bill could and can be the sub. Dipper just has to be a bit more controlling over Bill. Which is possible. We already have Will as proof. 
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frara_dreemur

THANK YOU!!!!!! I need help. 
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