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So for some of the people that followed me because of the nagito femboy hooters fanfic- my writing actually improved and I know how to handle sensitive content a lot better not to mention my humor is like.. slightly more upgraded- do ya’ll want me to rewrite it? I feel like I could add more context and I could make it a little more dramatic. Idk gimme opinions
Hey I am just going to be honest here, I did take things the wrong way when you were giving criticism. See everything I was writing about mental illness with my character was from personal experiences and was why I was getting defensive because it created from my experiences of mental illnesses and this story was my get away. In a way I felt like I was entering a world where I could get away from people and when you came it felt almost like attacking and I over reacted. Again I work myself up. You don’t have to read the story though when I do finish rewriting the prologue that’s when you can try reading it.
Again I truly apologize for my reaction. The name of the story is cringe as fuck anyways and some parts of the story is very sappy and then there is the Grammar AND THATS A DIFFERENT STORY! Lmao.
Anyways I actually thank you for the criticism it’s actually refreshing now that I see it and I actually am seeing some toxic tendencies I have and it’s not good. I feel like I was reacting in a toxic manner.
Again sorry hope you can read the rewritten prologue. It’s going to be in a separate book and I am cha going the name to Shattered Hearts because that’s way more fitting because both characters that’s being romanced are broken hearts.
Anyways sorry again and I am going to head straight to rewriting. And in fact thank you for it. Now that I reread your messages I see what your saying even more and will take it to heart IN A BETTER WAY. I think what was happening is that(and does not want to use it as an excuse) it was combination of my lack of social cues from my autism and the history of the reason of creating the story(which was to escape my shitty life) made me react in a toxic way and it was not chill of me lol. I lost my cool.
Sorry again and actually thank you.
It’s all good, seeing as how problematic my story can come across as I can really understand.
Definitely get that, I apologized at the end when I kept reading and realized that! I just know how mental illness can often be used as a trope or to make stories “better” so I assumed which is my bad. Shouldn’t jump to conclusions like that ^^ I deeply apologize for offending u cuz ur personal experience is valid
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