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@jocalderonee lol no it's clearer now. Everything is good thanks :)

Are there anymore questions? Or is it clearer now?

They were together, but they aren't anymore, since the fight in chapter fifteen they haven't talked so for now its just blurry.

@jocalderonee really? Like they've never been together (Ansley and Bronne)? Since the beginning or just now that you re-wrote the story??

Ansley and Bronne aren't together

Go check it now. Its fixed sorry.

For some weird reason it didnt't sync all of chapter sixteen. Because in the last chapter I wrote that they weren't together. And bronne isn't talking to ansley right now so... :/

@jocalderonee I was about when was the story set, like you know if the last scene with this Ansley was before or after Bronne has read her medical record. And are they still together like behind Bronne's back or is it just a memory?? Those kind of stuff aren't really clear to me

Why would I hate on you, you've been nothing but helpful and btw you have be there from the start. I think i'll just re write it and then re post it. So what was so wring with the last two chapters, there werent any povs in those?

@jocalderonee I'm so glad you're not hating on me or something. Well it's your story so you decide. I really don't know. But maybe you should take some time to re-write it with the modification. But whatever you do I'm sure it'd be great