Hey!
I'm Disha, a fourteen year old avid reader and aspiring writer! I'd be grateful if you could check out my book 'Fallen Queen' and tell me how to improvise since I'm super new at it! It'd also be helpful if you could check out my fantasy novel, "Fantasma" on my page! It'd mean a lot to me! If you're interested in poetry, you can check out 'Into The Black Hole' as well! I look forward to some advice from you, if time permits you!
Yours gratefully,
Disha✨
I've attached below a short excerpt of the summary of my book Fallen Queen! Hope you can offer me some advice and tips!
Summary:-
Fragile birds were never meant to fly. Metaphorically and practically. A bird with a broken wing shouldn’t try to fly- well, if it didn’t have a death wish.
And all he spoke was of a bird who had been caged, wings dipped in ink, cut off with a pair of scissors, a bird who was told meaningless lies. And the bird still soared into the sky. The only difference was that the bird was twice as strong. Pain took you there; when you rose from darkness, nothing could taint you anymore.
Every one of us has a story; their life being a book on the dusty shelf of so many others, waiting to be picked up, so that somebody else could see life through their shoes. One such was Achelois Crimson’s. And her story, well, you couldn’t help picking it up.
And when you went through the pages of it, your soul would drown so much that you’d regret picking up her story, you’d regret not sticking to pretty lies and fairy tales.