friendsandjazz3

chap is UP!

MiaLia479

In th next chp can you add ALOT. Of DRAMA maybe Evan gets back too his own ways but this times him and her where fighting but he pushes u down the stairs (like u mentioned in ur book) but he’s does it again and then ur sent to the hospital buts evan doesn’t show a bit of gilt and candam(or whatever his name is) comes and sees you but it doesn’t go well her brothers don’t like that idea/ but if u don’t want that then could u make another chap where she gets in trouble some how like a party or something and she (tries) key word tried and runs away with candom(I forgot his name lol) but obviously her brothers catch her/ another idea is her brothers invite their friends over (or they go out) dragging along their sister but this time Brandon isn’t on here side he isn’t saving her he’s just speak less and then the DRAMA continues and Evan goes out of his mind to try and embarrass Ella (or any brothers work) that it love ur story:)

vivian1556

The new chapter was so nice! What helps you come up with the brothers personalities? Do you have brothers of your own?

vivian1556

Oh no! Don’t tell me Ella is based off of you  I’m sure you love your brothers, but I’m really sorry if you have to deal with this sort of stuff in real life. Love your story. 
Balas

friendsandjazz3

@vivian1556 Hi lovely!! Yes I do! I base most of the personalities off my own brothers and experiences I've had with them haha
Balas

user72382386

Last chapter was so good, this is literally my fav book! and I would love if you could write this scene: (it's divided into parts because of wattpad word limit)
          
          Ella is setting boundaries with her brothers 
          she tells them something like that: 
          
          Part 1:
          
          "I appreciate you caring for me so much and I love you the moon and back, but your actions have affected my mental health badly, and no matter how much I tried to change it, trying to talk to you just makes me feel worse: I get up, I feel bad, I'm at school, I feel bad, I go to sleep, I feel bad. it's either that grades aren't enough, my clothes aren't good enough, I eat too little, I spend too much time with my friends, etc. 
          nothing, I ever do is good enough for you which means I'm not good enough for you" she takes a deep breath as this is very hard for her to speak about it. "There for, I think it would be better for me if we just gave each other space, and didn't talk as much as we do?"(I still haven't really decided on how to phrase it) 
          
          At this this point, her chin is wobbly, there are tears in her eyes since this desicion is very hard for her.
          
          "Now, can I go to my room?" She tries to get out, but the brothers are blocking her way, they think it's just one of her tantrums but sense it's deeper than that. "Alright, but can we hug you first?"  
          
          "No, I can't" she replies, she knows if she'll hug them they take her seriously and think this is another tantrum their baby sister is throwing.
          

user72382386

@ user72382386  omg thank you you're so sweettt 
            I love your pfp too!!
Balas

Dreamy_Diaries

@user72382386 
            Girl it was so good I’m gonna cry and your pfp oh god <3 
Balas