hey man how you doing ???
recently i tried to read your "dino dating sim" and the "deer hunter", i liked the concept BUT i have massive problem with how you organize the chapters.
i can't understand where the chapter is in the timeline, and which ones is the most recent ones.
for example i see: chapter 1 original, chater 2 original, chapter 1 revised, chapter 3 revised , etc...
if you colud please order your chapters so the book will have (chapter 1, chapter 2, etc) and another book will have all your ideas for revision it would be much appreciated.
on another note please do order the timeline in you stories because it is very confusing, i read the sim story and first chapter anon is living with tracerotopes (i think don't remember) next chapter he is living with the apexes 4 of them and not only 1 as in the previous chapter and after that he is outside not in school doing some shady buisness.
pls do clarify in the description that the timeline is fragmented or order it pls.
i am not here to digrade you i am simply speaking my frustrations and trying to give you insight on how as a new reader i see your books so you could improve and make even more amazing stories (really loved the dino sim world building) :)
best of regards Cats_army :) <3
