frostyligth

Happy fourth of July everyone 

Cosmickatana

Hey, I read your RWBY harem x Female reader. I like it so far, and I hope me saying this is being constructive in your writing. And I'm not one to criticize. That's why I recommend using Google docs to write, so you can use the 'spell and grammar check' it'll suggest changes that'll better make your sentences clear. Though, following every grammar and word suggestion is good because It'll mask your writing style. All in all, I really do hope to read more of your story. Keep at it, and I hope you have more commitment to your stories than I do, considering all the stories I haven't finished on my profile. 

frostyligth

@Cosmickatana  thanks you so much for the advice and yes i will try and stay active on writing more in my story  
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