JacobEscarcega

I'm gonna be re-send the link for you cause your now starting to get back into Wattpad and writing, so this is for everyone and you to use just so you don't have to scroll down all over again;
          
          Bookfox - 9 Writing Techniques Hemingway Used to become a LEGEND / 7 Writing Techniques So Good That They Should Be Illegal
          
          Brandon Sanderson - Five Tips Of Writing Your First Novel / It's Time To Clean
          
          Outstanding Screenplays - 10 Writing Tips From Stephen King / 20 Screenwriting Tips From
          Christopher Nolan
          
          Ernest Hemming Way's Iceberg Theory Or Theory Of Omission (A Writing Technique That Focuses On The Descriptions Of Action/Dialogue/Emotions In a Simple Blunt Yet Impactful Manner) 
          
          Roughest Drafts - How Authors Write A Novel In One Month
          
          Use Quarter-Hour (15 Minutes) and Half-Hour (30 Minutes) Time-Bursts too to make sure that your writing is simplified during any busy time of the day and night for you, so your writing-style during the process can be in the screenwriting scripts, then finish it completely later on whenever you have free time.: D
          
          I just want to say always focus on creativity in all stories that you do, not with just Death Battle but with your other stories, being creative has to do with utilizing all techniques and twists-n-turns from every writer or fanfic writer while simultaneously using your OWN style of storytelling.

JacobEscarcega

Frozen, I’m posting for you so you can use someday in the future, where your more healthier and have more free time, what I’m about to comment is more of a suggested request, so I understand if you don’t accept it. 
          
          Incase you want your Death Battle Story to have more in-depth while still being a reaction fanfic; You definitely should let the Heroes/Anti-Heroes meet each other in the future at some-point in the fanfic. Evolve the aftermath Two-Fighter-Meetings to the Group-Meetings instead so they learn/bond with each other over their experiences/traumas. 
          
          While also making all of the villains/monsters contained still (Like SCP-982 since he needs to be locked up even more by Higher-Cosmic Powers by the Host-Gods, which I hope you can consider).
          
          Also besides how funny and comedic some of the Groups could find each other, I feel like the most tragic and disturbed groups deserve to gain help and bond each with each other as fellow-comrades! (For example; Doom Slayer Meeting Taimanin Team cause they would treat him as a man instead of an idol or a fearful figure and him caring for them GREATLY cause they sacrifice their peace for the world’s peace instead) It wouldn't just feel wholesome but also cathartic since it would allow the characters to feel seen and never be alone with their lives, which can lead to great character development!
          
          You could either have special chapters that has the Group-Meetings or let us see the Group-Meetings before the next Death Battle starts like your recent and previous chapters before the battle starts. I just wanted to type this cause it has so much potential for greater-interactions and development.

StrongGuy156

Happy Thanksgiving, frozenchamp96. When is the next chapter of your Death Battle, or Hell, Heaven, and Earth reacts to Hazbin Hotel/Helluva Boss stories coming out?

JacobEscarcega

@StrongGuy156 I think it’s being work on currently, since if you go down to the  latest post, frozenchamp said that he just got recovered from influenza virus. So all we can do is just wait and be patient. : )
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Rad1085

My friend I hope you are getting some rest and taking a break

frozenchamp96

@Rad1085 After I update my previous story first.
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Herfansapongsibidang

@frozenchamp96 so when will you update the omniverse react deathabttle
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frozenchamp96

@Rad1085 I already took a break, I just recovered from influenza A virus 
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Mk203super

Hey man, are you still alive or are you in the college.

Mk203super

@frozenchamp96 ok man, i waiting because i'm soon have exam.
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Mk203super

@frozenchamp96 okay man, which one the death battle or the others of hazbin hotel.
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JacobEscarcega

I’m gonna be re-send the link for you and everyone here so they don’t have to scroll down all over again;
          
          Bookfox - 9 Writing Techniques Hemingway Used to become a LEGEND / 7 Writing Techniques So Good That They Should Be Illegal 
          
          Brandon Sanderson - Five Tips Of Writing Your First Novel / It’s Time To Clean 
          
          Outstanding Screenplays - 10 Writing Tips From Stephen King / 20 Screenwriting Tips From Christopher Nolan
          
          Ernest Hemming Way’s Iceberg Theory Or Theory Of Omission
          
          Roughest Drafts - How Authors Write A Novel In One Month
          
          Use Quarter-Hour (15 Minutes) and Half-Hour (30 Minutes) Time-Bursts too to make sure that your writing is simplified during any busy time of the day and night for you, so your writing-style during the process can be in the screenwriting scripts, then finish it completely later on whenever you have free time. : D
          
          You’ve done a great epic and dedicated job with not just the Death Battle fanfic but including your fanfic series, that are so well-made and though-out.

Rainstar2341

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you know man i just talked with the others the more i think about the problems with the exorcist and adam's own detah it was shockingly his fault think about it starts with the domino effect with adam persuading sera from her paranoia of hell because adam only wanted to kill them for fun for the overpopulation of the war but tje plot twist there never was going to be one think about it sinners are just normal humans they have no idea until Carmilla killed an exorcist, NO ONE knew such a thing was possible. Vox itself says, "Charlie proved that angels can die." The only one who feared an uprising was Sera, and it was Adam who convinced her to approve the exterminations, behind the backs of all the other angels. Or to sum it up, because of his damned desire to kill, it was Adam who ended up causing all the mess that's happening now, including the deaths of the exorcists and his own, since he and his troops left their weapons lying around everywhere so in other words if adam left hell alone all of the death for both places would have never happened all the mutilations betrayal all in the end it was all adam's fault for causing all this and eventually his own death in the end he reaped what he sowed in something called the butterfly effect

Rainstar2341

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say when we do reach to season 1 finale i am sure when charles see adam kill pentious with no shame thinking it as no big deal i think it would horrify and anger him because this time he's not coming back ( for now ) I think when he sees adam he wants to kill him 
          
          one of the main problems if redemption does happen is that victims when seeing killers will not feel comfortable like victims like how can many be okay with adam heck some of our sinner cast must have killed like angel and soilders and if they do some who they killed they feel scared hate and no justice so its best to fix that to slowly get people into it because people can fogive but forgetting is hard so i hope you fix that problem considerign pentious is fine considering he never hurt anyone in heaven