I love animals wolves and birds my favorite animals are ,i have written 2 stories but am unsure how to edit and finish them if anyone has advice i would appreciate it 1. storie line is a boy named jack who lives in an orphanage has dreams which come true he goes for walk and meets a girl who happens to be a princess who has a prophesy in her family that a boy who has these dreams will save her from a wizard but die saving her and her people(a twist the wizard is a family member who jack does not know he had.)2.storie line a boy named drake lives with his mother but hes no ordinary boy he can fly and heal things he goes on a trip with his uncle along the way a series of events leads him to meet his father who tells him hes an elf(twist in the tale an injury leading to there encounter brings drake and a fairy to leave the family hes known behind and seak out the fairys who may or may not except them leaving them as equals or outcasts.
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fruitee22
Aug 30, 2013 01:21PM
hi this is victoria i have recently added the beginning of my story i would appreciate any comments to see if its good enough for my next chapter.View all Conversations
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