Katherine Ordonez

I'm having serious issues rn. Like I can't concentrate on anything properly.. I'm having such a hard time writing the new chapter for Promise Me 

Btw you guys.. I'm working on the chapter for Promise Me

Okay serious question:
          
          Is there anything wrong with my writing style? Do you think I should change anything? 
          
          Please do let me know and leave some criticism for me to cry over while I eat my chocolate chip cookies. 
          
          Bye bye!

Y'all like my new profile pictures? (o＾皿＾)
          Haha I really like the background! HOOTERS ARE IN THE BACKGROUND, I SAID HOOTERS ARE IN YOUR FACE NOW!
          I made up that just now. It's now copyrighted to me. You cannot steal it. 
          Good day now.