full-mo0n

Should I continue to write the sequal to The Hunt For Eleven (Trouble in paradise) ? Please let me know. I haven't had people reading the last three chapter I've posted, and I'm afraid that it's something like my writings terrible, the plots bad, too many holes in the story, etc; just please write a reply to this post about your input, ideas, cunstructive criticism, ANYTHING! 

full-mo0n

Should I continue to write the sequal to The Hunt For Eleven (Trouble in paradise) ? Please let me know. I haven't had people reading the last three chapter I've posted, and I'm afraid that it's something like my writings terrible, the plots bad, too many holes in the story, etc; just please write a reply to this post about your input, ideas, cunstructive criticism, ANYTHING!