fullonjerrie
I just changed the title of my story. Hope you will enjoy it still. ❤ #cr22
fullonjerrie
fullonjerrie
How is the story so far? I'm gonna finish it soon. Please rate my writing so that I could start the next one fast.
fullonjerrie
@mixxxer thank you. Introducing Jed was for a closure for Jade. I can honestly say that he's not gonna be around...
mixxxer
@ crayzlm hey, your story is one of my favorites, your unique idea, that perrie and jade are both connected with zayn haha, but i feel strange when suddenly appear jed ... idk maybe you are planning something
fullonjerrie
Hey guys. I would like you all to provide me with a feedback on my story. I wanna know if you liked what I had written. I'm just a novice writer with no prior proper experience in writing. Did you like the story progression? What can I do to make it better? Thank you.
fullonjerrie
@mixxxer Still on the lookout for the reasons, but I'm working on an angle and hope that it will work.
fullonjerrie
@mixxxer thanks for the reply... I had the same idea... of making Perrie pursue Jade....but Jade avoids her...for some 'unknown' reasons.