Ideas for Jasmine part 1. I had to go back through the story. You've designed your characters. You have designed the society, currency and hierarchy in great detail. Excellent foundation.
Jasmine has met and accepted:
Luka- Forrest dee spirit.
Lin Yi- Artic Wolf. And the one Rose is particularly pissed about.
Jack- Artic Fox
Edur- Royal White Tiger.
She's caught the eyes of:
Aurelius- Golden mermaid
Red eyed mystery Man.
And, unfortunately, Rose. Narcissistic Trouble maker.
You left off in the middle of the 'pageant'.
Rosa is getting desperate seeing Jasmine getting attention and recognition. Bypassing her schemes and attempt at control. Basically CHEATING.
I think that Mr Mermaid, being a judge, should openly chastise her for her cheating and disqualify her. And, of course, our sweet Jasmine will win.
Then, Rose, being in a rage, and unjustly blaming Jasmine arrange for her to be attacked or something along that line. But, since Mr Red eyes is watching. He can somehow swoop in to save her. He has been fighting his feelings, but seeing her in danger he exposes himself. Create a backstory for him and why he is Mr mysterious.
Just some ideas.
