funpoison98

So I am finally using this app full force once again. I am writing poetry...or something I'd like to say is poetry adjacent...maybe I don't know. Please feel free to comment on anything and leave suggestions. I know I am slacking with this grammar and structure, don't attack me grammar police. Seriously though, I appreciate any and all feedback. 

its nine am, the clock ticks tic tok 
          im quiet heartbeats ragging tic tok
          sweat beads off my forehead hit the floor tic tok 
          its twelve pm im still alone clock grows louder tic tok 
          my head pounds tic tok
          paranoia kicks in tic tok
          its 3 pm still scared tic tok
          sliced wrists blood drips tic tok
          6 pm moms home clock s cilenced 
          emptyness fills the sound waves 
          clock starts again new day tic tok