fvxyoongs

Guys I'm swimming back! BTS is back and I won the ticket war. Anyways just wanted to say I've seen a lot of the comments on my book press play and I see a lot of my mistakes and what I need to improve. Honestly some of the comments have made me laugh. I hope you read my new book DTH as my writing style has changed more in that. Don't worry updates coming soon!

lalalakshna2345

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hiii,,, i loveee ur writing but I couldn't help and notice that one of ur stories... "drawn to him" is almost exactly similar to another popular story.. "mutual help" by personasintro in ao3. It was widely popular on Wattpad before but then it got removed from this platform and the author posted it on ao3. From the way jungkook was heartbroken when miyoko broke up with him with the exact lines "finding herself"... like it was the same in mutual help. And tbh i LOVEEE the story but in all honesty it tooo similar to mutual help and I just hope miyoko doesn't bring up the cheating, abortion, and evrything kiko brought up in mutual help. It really is widely weird on how in both stories the male leads - jungkook- always end up fucking the female lead - oc- without even fully moving on from their ex's even thought they still "love" them. That legit proves they never loved their ex "truly". Like loll?? just like that u fuck another girl?? but yea, i love the story but still I just didn't want the entire story to be similar to mutual help since I love the way the story is going and ur writing. But ofc it ur story and ur writing, but I just wanted to express my thoughts (if I seem a bit crazy) but ig u took inspiration (which i adore) but the trauma from mutual help kiko is still not gone, and i don't want the same to happen with miyoko hahah. anyways love u lots byeee.

fvxyoongs

and honestly I the Kiko drama still holds me till this day and I struggle to even process it!!! 
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fvxyoongs

Hey! I just wanted to clear that up! I absolutely love the book mutual help like honestly i have so many memories from it as to why the first few lines I feel like were the same. I did take heavy inspiration from it but I cannot compare to how amazing Mutual help is. Personally DTH heads in a way different direction from Mutual help like the abortion and cheating definitely will not happen as I feel like by them I'm basically COPYING the story instantly and I would never want to that! However The whole bsf and boyf trope I honestly have so many ideas for that that doesn't go the same way as mutual help! But thank you so much for the love and support ❤️
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fvxyoongs

Guys I'm swimming back! BTS is back and I won the ticket war. Anyways just wanted to say I've seen a lot of the comments on my book press play and I see a lot of my mistakes and what I need to improve. Honestly some of the comments have made me laugh. I hope you read my new book DTH as my writing style has changed more in that. Don't worry updates coming soon!

urmumsfavho3

I really enjoyed reading DTH!!  GIRLL your writing is so engaging and underrated, you're such a gem anw looking forward to the future updates.TC ♡ 

fvxyoongs

oh my days the way my heart jumped! Thank you so much I was currently tweaking up the next chapter for Drawn to you when I saw this on my phone! I won't go bald dw 
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urmumsfavho3

PLEASE DONT GO BALD ¯⁠\⁠_⁠༼⁠ ⁠ಥ⁠ ⁠‿⁠ ⁠ಥ⁠ ⁠༽⁠_⁠/⁠¯
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