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@AnaLuvsToWrite  Yeah I'm not good with spacing and things like that, my actual document isn't spaced at all so I kinda just space it when I copy paste it onto here. I didn't like that I used "said" so much either and I did try to fix it later on in the story but at this point I wrote all of this like 4 months ago so I was kinda still learning.

@gabbygals12  Okay one thing that i noticed while reading that kind of threw me off was paragraph spacing, a few parts when multiple people spoke it was in one line so i got confused but it's an easy fix. You know, a new paragraph when it's a new topic, change of scene, or someone speaks i believe, (i struggle with that)  
            
            Another thing when it's a paragraph and only talking about one person, you mention their name once in the beginning and the rest use their pronoun instead of their name. So, it's not the same word repeating, same thing if you are describing something so you can't say "The window was big and grand. The window had yellow curtains," ETC. Instead, you would say "it had yellow curtains." 
            
            I believe this is the last thing, the word "said' was used really often, IMO using other words makes people understand how the person felt and sounded. Pinterest has endless ideas, so you could check and see.  I keep a mental list because it irks me if i use the word "said" in my writing lol 
            
            You'll learn the more you write, read, and watching videos. Also, Pinterest does have lots of tips and tricks.

@gabbygals12 no problem! I doubt myself a lot on pretty much everything and have to be assured to be okay

@AnaLuvsToWrite omggg tysm
            I've always had trouble with 1st chapters/info dumps so the 1st chapter was honestly the one I thought was the worst lol and it has like 30+ chapters