gabi_dancer

Hey y'all, can you please take a minute to read my new poem? I'd really like some feedback. It's going to be a series of more than one, but I've only written that so far. Thanks (: 

gabi_dancer

@efarley25 Honestly, I had like 2 followers before I wrote 'If I Die Today'. It has a lot of reads and votes, but that was not what I was going for. I don't want anyone to think I wrote that poem only for votes and follows, because I didn't. I kind of just got lucky. I appreciate every comment, vote and follow and I would be happy even with only 5 reads on that poem. My point is, Poetry has helped me a lot, try writing some! It's made me a better writer and has gotten me more notices. Hope I helped(: If you wanted different advice, well, I'm sorry because I cant give it haha. Poetry is the base of writing and will help you a ton, if you do it write(; that's all I can say!  

gabi_dancer

Ok, I just want to have a really happy rant real quick. Here goes:
          
          The story '16 and Pregnant' by Monica something (I'm sorry I can't remember!) is SO AMAZING!! It's completed now, and I'm like almost crying and I feel depressed because its over!!):): If you haven't read it, GO READ IT NOW!! IT'S WONDERFUL!! The author is my inspiration!! The main character is Cassandra and Quintion, so hopefully that helps you find the book easier. GO READ!!! It's like OMG...
          
          Ok rant over(: chapter 5 of Home Ec. Love tomorrow! Hopefully early (;