Hey, a couple of pointers. First, I don't see that you credited any artists or renderers (from the artstyle, aren't a bunch of these from AceAndShadow? Do you have their permission? Have you credited them? If you haven't, this is basically plagiarism and/or theft of works that others have put a lot of time and effort into.
Secondly, your writing is really, really hard to read. Random capitals, no paragraphs (meaning it's a nightmare to keep track of what line you're reading). Use grammarly - or even microsoft word - to give you pointers with grammar. It'll help people read your story and make sense of it.
I can see a lot of other people are sick and tired of stealing theirs and their friends' works, and you have consistently ignored them and made excuses. It's not that hard to credit someone - just put a link or the name of the artist under the picture. If you need help using this platform, there are many skilled writers and members of the community here - you just have to ask.
