galaxylight33

The amount of times I’ve overused the adjective/adverb “as” in my earlier chapters to transition to a new sentence is concerning. Like girl stoppp
          	
          	 Like commas??? Maybe a period hello??
          	
          	I’m having so much fun doing a re-edit on my books honestly bc it’s sooo bad
          	
          	
          	
          	
          	

galaxylight33

The amount of times I’ve overused the adjective/adverb “as” in my earlier chapters to transition to a new sentence is concerning. Like girl stoppp
          
           Like commas??? Maybe a period hello??
          
          I’m having so much fun doing a re-edit on my books honestly bc it’s sooo bad
          
          
          
          
          

galaxylight33

!PSA! - I’m in the process of going back through ‘The Ghost’s Live’ and re-editing it from the very first chapter. So if y’all go back through and something doesn’t make sense it’s probably because I’m changing things around and haven’t finished the final product lol Just bear with me.
          
          Love y’all. Be safe.