@garirus thank you for your feedback xD I know my english is bad because I'm just a broke 13 yr old kid but I will fix it! thank you and sorry if my english is bad! :D
@garirus i have read the entire story and i must say that it is very good but i would like to ask the question if you would let me rewrite 1 chapter to get rid of most of the grammatical mistakes.
its ok if you dont want me to in the end its your story but i just wanted to offer the service