hi, i'm eli. here's a poem by me and also me analyzing it because i have quite literally nothing better to do
i know i did you wrong
long before we were us
over something useless, we fought
vast expanse of something unknown
every now and then, it comes to mind
years past all that happened
out of the woods, inside the game
until i understand what you were thinking
analysis:
if you look at the left, it spells 'i love you'. this is meant to represent someone who was left very confused about their first relationship, overthinking about their feelings long after it ends. it could also be implied that the other did something really weird to break them up (perhaps arguing about something futile?)
as it is a flow of thoughts, it has no order, no rhymes and no set number of syllables.
is it a good poem? eh. did i write this in two minutes just because, not bothering to check back? yeah.
i could make it a challenge, write a poem every day until you get good day 1
