@gaybruh84 I just wanted to give you a compliment, or at least I hope you take it that way. I’ve just come across your account and stories and had the time to start reading them. And I just wanted to let you know that your writing has greatly improved since you’ve written your first story. And from my perspective do a great job giving well rounded chapters. Meaning I don’t think anyone cares how long a chapter is but a short one can be upsetting because we’re left wanting more. You may do time skip, which I personally think you handle pretty well but most story have them. You give us good enough detail to help us picture the scene well and feel the emotions of each character involved in the chapter. What I’m saying and wanting to say is that I think you’ve made some much needed improvements in your writing and are doing a fabulous job.