geckhoe13

sooo i know i said that i’mma post a new chapter these days but i realized that i misplanned the plot (in my head ofc) and now i have to rethink it, but what i do know is that it’s gonna be such a wholesome chapter so all i ask is a liiitle more time
          	
          	i should post more on my profile cause this seems fun to be in touch here as well
          	
          	in the meantime, i’ll forever be grateful for all your comments and suggestions
          	
          	xx

marsfilms

Syd if this chapter also ends in a cliffhanger i might be on the news

marsfilms

@marsfilms i am so scared to read it now (i love you too but i will be in your walls soon)
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geckhoe13

uhm…… yes……. but after that there’s Amelie aka the last chapter of part one and that won’t end in a cliffhanger (please don’t hurt me i love you)
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marsfilms

I love paranoia sm girl like i havent felt this much warmth reading a ff since i was 14  i love you sm 

marsfilms

@marsfilms thank you sm! Patiently waiting for the updates. All the bestttt 
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geckhoe13

you are so so sweet!! glad you like it so far cause there’s so much more to come
            xx
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yourm0m_x

hey there’s an account called villainarc and she’s lwk copying your story 

geckhoe13

heyyy, thank you for pointing it out to me!! xx
            i guess that you are referring to the spencer reid fanfic called “the game”. i went on to read it and personally i do not consider it copying. sure, there are some similar things, such as the names (Beaumont, Louise and Amelie — when i first chose the names i googled french names lol and these are quite popular ones so i would never accuse someone of stealing names — imagine choosing anna as an oc name and how frequently used is that) + Cassidy (that’s a funny one, though it might be from a case so idk).
            the only other “similarity” i did find was the secret identity but that’s a whole thrope and definitely not being counted as an original idea of mine:):)
            anywayss, i will continue reading it just in case (no shade to the author, it’s actually really good and i’m not accusing them of anything).
            personally, i do consider it stealing when it comes to specific plot ideas or edits without giving credits
            but once again, thank you so so much for thinking of me and please do tell if you’ll ever find something else lol
            i like to see the best in people and as someone who has been writing since i was thirteen, i’ve always had huge respect for other people’s work as i’d like to believe that they have of mine!!
            lots of love
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userbaeee

hii! just wanted to come by to say WOW. I’m enjoying PARANOIA so so much, I’m obsessed with your writing and how you are developing the whole story, really excited and looking forward to know what will happen. (Also, wanted to drop the fact that I’m in love with your writing, I love acting and I’m reading everything like a script and getting to know Eleanor is fantastic) <3 

geckhoe13

little fyi: i screamed at first when i read this lol
            i can’t thank you enough for your kind words!! i’ve always been afraid that len is not the most likeable person as there’s too much tragedy lurking around her, but at the same time it was really important to me to stay that way in order to achieve the character development that i’ve been planning.
            but kinds words like these are the push i need to keep getting better at writing, so once again, thank you so so much and i’m always down to hear your opinions!!
            much love
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geckhoe13

sooo i know i said that i’mma post a new chapter these days but i realized that i misplanned the plot (in my head ofc) and now i have to rethink it, but what i do know is that it’s gonna be such a wholesome chapter so all i ask is a liiitle more time
          
          i should post more on my profile cause this seems fun to be in touch here as well
          
          in the meantime, i’ll forever be grateful for all your comments and suggestions
          
          xx

LehrbaMar

Hey thereI got a question for you about the last chapter of your story. I noticed that you used the word "glaring at her" in situations where the word doesnt add up to the context. Because glaring means staring at somebody angrily, in german: "Todesblick", so I wanted to ask, if you maybe meant "to stare/glance at somebody". I've read that english isnt your first language, so I thought that maybe it was a mistake? If not, could you explain why Emily and JJ suddenly glare at her? And why she is glaring at the guy in the last scene? English also isnt my first language. Btw. no hate, i am just curious. I realy like your story, and i am excited for a more detailed backstory from your oc.

geckhoe13

heeey, you are completely right and I sure haven’t noticed that mistake, though in my mind it was meant to be used as “glancing”. Thank you soo much for reading my story and signaling this, as I’m going to edit the story asap.
            About my character’s backstory, I planned on taking the time and just throw some details here and there until it’s time to publish two chapters centered on her.
            As always, I appreciate your comment, I look forward to signaling any mistake that I may do in the future and I’m here to answer any questions.
            lots of love xx
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