gellyfaerie

Okay Guys for my first book The Danger Ive edited it loads and I've got the second book under way I swear I will post them when I can! :)

@Fallzswimmer I'll try an get round to it today but I might not be able to for a while x

Hey Hey!
          
          Just was wondering if you could check out my story My Life with the Walter Boys, All Twelve of Them. I would really appreciate some advice on how to improve my writing. 
          
          ~Ali

@luckycharms your welcome :) I'll have a look at your pieces :) and it would be really nice if you gave me some constructive criticism on my second chapter? and I've made a short story called "Cliffs" :) and I'm in the beginnings of another book called "Wolves" So if you could just read at least one of them please? :) thanks! :D

HII!
          Thanks so much for becoming a fan!
          I really hope you like my stories!
          Please comment and vote!
          Thank you very much!!
          =D

if you like my first chapter please comment, if you don't please comment with constructive criticism please :) thanks xx

@Sunflowolf13 hello :) 

@Blush18 you are most welcome :) xx urm just joined lol :) any advice?

thanx soooo much for fanning dear! xoxo 

Hey guys :) If you like the first Chapter of my book please tell me and I'll post the next Chapter :) I have 16 Chapters finished but I need to have 10 more at the least until it's finished x