Naeem06
Wow thank you for taking the time and effort in writing this story. (I have waited a thousand years.) All your efforts are genuinely appreciated. I literally spent my morning binge reading your story and I have to say that I am obsessed. It is so lovely to see a refreshing take on Jasper’s story. I am all here for the Bella Bashing it just adds a new dynamic. I wish Edward was not as rigid or antisocial in this as you made him out to be but I guess he aligns with Bella. I really do hope that Charlie puts Bella in her place and does not condone her actions. It would be great for Margret to flip out on Bella. I really do hope that when you get to the New Moon portion that you don’t separate Jasper and Margret as I feel their love transcends everything. If he betrays her in that way then it won’t be genuine to his character. Perhaps you can come up with some original plot line where they go to a different country for an apprenticeship perhaps to do with her novel that she is creating. That way she won’t be abandoning Charlie but rather progressing with her career yet remaining with Jasper. I hope the mate/reincarnation reveal happens soon as technically they are married and it would be soo heartwarming to see more close moments in the present setting. I am really looking forward to reading what you have in store for us all. I was just wondering if there was going to be any smut in this story? As I vote yes if you do decide to pursue it. Once again thank you for taking the effort in writing this story. You deserve far more recognition. I simply cannot wait for the next update.
