Hi Genivieve, this looks great and I enjoyed reading your novel!
Just some points to consider:
When you edited the last 3 chapters you didn't delete the paragraphs you reducted - these are showing as double repeated paragraphs. Please either delete these or complete the paragraphs!
Perfectly done I'm proud of you!
Luvvies M.Liesl
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