Hey can u plz let us em know when u are planning to update your story Rejected.
Or is the story discontinued or is it on hold. Can u plz let me know since you haven't update since 2014 three years ago. The story is an amazing awesome creative different unique wonderful story plot you have going on there. It's one of my favorite book on here. So I hope you are okay and I hope u can let me know if the story will be continue or not... Thank u for listening to me.
Give it some big villan that she actually has trouble defeating or mabey the two girls have to put aside differences for a greater good the stories very good it is just missing something untangable
If u could keep up with the story I have a few ideas blue and the alpha girl could be sisters and the alpha has to learn about the world not being all about her her sister blue and the. Alpha can have equally split power unmatched by any one else's together there power is unstoppable
You need some writing lessons and proper grammar lessons. I mean in your books there are so much repetition and a huge amount of grammar errors. Plus it's doesn't grasp readers, it builds no tension, it's not interesting. And before you flip out at me, just know, I'm entitled to my opinion and I'm just saying this because it's constructive criticism.
Yeah sorry I'm late but I could give two fucks you don't need to comment on he books they are great and if you don't like it don't read it keep your shiz to yourself yeah I know I should take my own advice but once again I could give two fucks
How old are you? I'm reading your books, but there are so many errors. I'm not trying to insult you, but I was just wondering if you are young or English isn't your main language. I mean I love your books, but sometimes it's hard to get.