Gargi

Hello everyone!! 
          I am back in Wattpad and I would like if you all can follow my Instagram account - 
          @delicate_echoes

Must say u are an amazing writer 
          I really LOVEEEDDDDDDDDD  your book like amaJINNNN I CANT JUST STOP MYSELF FROM LAUGHING MY ASS OUT EVEN IN PUBLIC 
          
          Getting all those judgemental looks  
          
          Still wanted to appreciate u r amazing man  
          Will be waiting for ur next work 
          
          Love yaa       

Your writing is good but it can be a complete put off when you are writing someone pov as 'you' all the time. It can be very confusing to readers and completely spoil the language. It's ok to write pov as 'I'. Better keep in mind when you are writing your next novel. 

Hiii...I was very amazed about your video in your YouTube channel..so I want to ask why you don't make all your story into Wattpad...I truly love to read ittt...I hope you do it 

Your friend recommended me your account and I will give a try obviously. 
          And Gargi? it's my bff's name what a coincidence.

Haii 

i really enjoyed your officer Jeon series 
          And sooooooooooooooooo excited for the new series 

@Crystal__bear_ Thank you so much for loving it, it means alot

Hi author

Ahhhh I am so excited