Gargi

Hii authornim..... I really loved your story.... Please do check my story too if you get time and let me know the improvements I need to do as I am a new writer...
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376869149?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Rajyasricha

Hello everyone!!!
          I wanted to inform you that recently I published my own book in Amazon Kindle and you all could download it for free till 14th of April. 
          
          The name of the book is - Our destined 4'o clock. 
          
          Thank you and have a great day ahead. I hope many of you will download and give me the reviews I require.

Must say u are an amazing writer 
          I really LOVEEEDDDDDDDDD  your book like amaJINNNN I CANT JUST STOP MYSELF FROM LAUGHING MY ASS OUT EVEN IN PUBLIC 
          
          Getting all those judgemental looks  
          
          Still wanted to appreciate u r amazing man  
          Will be waiting for ur next work 
          
          Love yaa       

Your writing is good but it can be a complete put off when you are writing someone pov as 'you' all the time. It can be very confusing to readers and completely spoil the language. It's ok to write pov as 'I'. Better keep in mind when you are writing your next novel. 

Hiii...I was very amazed about your video in your YouTube channel..so I want to ask why you don't make all your story into Wattpad...I truly love to read ittt...I hope you do it 

Your friend recommended me your account and I will give a try obviously. 
          And Gargi? it's my bff's name what a coincidence.

Haii 

i really enjoyed your officer Jeon series 
          And sooooooooooooooooo excited for the new series 

@Crystal__bear_ Thank you so much for loving it, it means alot

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