gheat02

Please read and tell me improvments https://www.wattpad.com/story/106789401

gheat02

Started a new book called Luna Bloom. Hopefully a little different but who knows? Really appreciate comments and feedback.... Please tell me ur thoughts! First chapter isn't really a chapter more an explanation but I think it may be needed. At the start of the second/first chapter i will describe all the main characters so you get an idea of how they look. I'm going to try to be consistent with this one but help needed!

gheat02

not as bad as u @at1725
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at1725

@gheat02  hahahahaha cringe
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gheat02

Hey guys just started chapter 2 of The Accident of ALL Accidents so you better read chapter 1 first, right???? Tell me ur thoughts on the starting chapter and I will try hard to finish the second. Thx guys xx