Gheka Maurer

Sana author ilagay mo din dito Yong story mong Mafia Heir

Hi po ang ganda po ng story nyo na eighteen..Hindi lang po sya puro kilig may matutunan rin po..Nainspire po ako sa story nyo na ito 

hi author, wala po bang story si ethan and kendrie ng secret mission?? feel ko may something na pwdng mgng couple, suggestion lng po.. thanks..

@Rencenono11 Wala po. 

@fyruza OMG! Thankyou so much ❤❤❤ I appreciate it a lot. :) Thanks for encouraging an aspiring author like me 'coz its really helpful in some ways. HAHAHAHA 

pwede po bang pa critic ng story ko? Yung I HATE SUMMER yung title? and if ok lng sama mo na rin yung oneshot ko :)) hehe thanks po ;)

http://w.tt/1FqT4Uc hope you read this thanks 

Vote for vote? Just piem me :)

hello po. sana you can read my story..mwahg

Gud pm Ghelmaurer08
          First of all i would like to say thank you for giving me the opportunity to critic your work 
          First thing: Ang catchy ng prologue mo, malalaman kaagad ng reader kung ano nilalaman ng story
          Second: In trend, halos lahat ng reader lalo na yung mga broken hearted pati bitter maeenganyo basahin
          Third: Nice flow of story, very smooth, nice order of plot
          Recommendations/ Suggestions: Make it unique :), kasi mostly ng nababasa kong genre ng story may ganitong set up, try to make it like may filipino values, or lagyan mo ng unting timpla ng ibang genre like horror :) mgcliclick yan for sure ;)
          > so yun lng i hope nkatulong ako :)
          > pls critic din my first ever work which is What is like to be Feelingerang Froglet? And dont forget to vote ah :3