Wooooow, as I'm reading They again, I'm realizing what a mess it is- I want to say I'll update with some MAJOR changes by tomorrow- the actual story will not change, but if you feel like you must re-read it then go ahead- but I think I'm overestimating myself. I've also changed writing styles since last year, and I think the story in general is just sliiiightly cringey and too fast-paced (even though I can't exactly explain things the way I want to because you're supposed to imagine them for yourself, hence why it moves along quickly). As my first work, it's not going to be my best, but I'd like to make it as good as possible before moving onto more fanfiction and stories I have planned (not to mention it's a grammatical atrocity lol). Expect a new chapter and some changes soon, and thank you for reading They!