AlyssaRivera944

I Loved the story and how other people can relate to it and how it portrays lifes ups and downs and if i continue its probaly going to end up being and essay but i felt that i could relate to it I mean im not lesbian im straight but when u think about it thats how real life is like i said and im going to repeat it it portrays lifes ups and downs and how in life we make mistakes and we move on from them and put that in the past and im gonna stop amd just say that i hope u guys live a happily ever after and that this is one of the best stories ive ever read and theirs much more that i want to say but this is all for now 

VaibhavBharty

@AlyssaRivera944 i appreciate your experience n feeling
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stormyhumboldt

Sweet story.  There are quite a few grammar errors that detracted my attention.  --there is 2 guys--  Should be there are 2.  Same thing later with "is 2 girls"...
          I do proof reading & I will proof your story if you wish.
          Let me know & be well!
          -----Stormy

VaibhavBharty

@stormyhumboldt hey miss or mr dont c it as a critic just enjoy criticism sometime takes away the feel n enjoyment of story.but i do aknowladge ur efforts
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