@_Caylove hahaha you sound real sour. First you should figure out a way to make your organized and have some sort of structure. You scatter all throughout the book , making absolutely no sense. For example when they were going to the club you stated that her friend Clair came and picked her up but a couple of paragraphs later she is leaving in her own car. Second of all this isn't Twitter, Instagram or snapchat! News flash I'm not here for followers I'm here to read books the previous sites stated are sites you go to for followers. If you can't talk criticism then you should stop writing books, even if it's for a hobby because you'd never be able to handle it. If me saying your book was confusing pissed you off find a new career. Thank you.
Sincerely, Gigggs <----pretty sure you know what that means
