Nice story Aira,nabasa ko yung Kiss from Exo kaya lang wrong grammar ka.instead na "better luck next time"yung nasa story mo eh "better lock next time"tsaka yung isa pang mali mo "young master where her"dapat "young master were here",unless na lang kung mali yung type mo. :) nagkakamali ang lahat Aira,keep up the good work. :) i like your fanfic story.
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