ARI3SSAM
Sorry for plugging author...Good day everyone..Could anyone read my story and pa critique din I want to enhance my skills po and gusto ko pong malaman kung may dapat po bang ayusin or wala po.. My first ever story po tapos first chapter palang po gusto ko po ng feedback bago ko po I published Ang next chapters po https://www.wattpad.com/1489269383?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=KyOdAiNa12