AJEmpire1107
Hey author your books are good your reaction book especially of the pokemon reaction but it is actually not that much great it is lower than average like that because you are views are not going fast and votes and comments because people are getting a little bore seeing your first few minutes do you know the reason the reason is this that you write the direct dialogue and not right actually what happened after that exactly the way now you made the girati na the dialga scene fight but no one knows what happened and are suddenly like this will literally didn't made it look and people reaction is good but reaction when they ash there is the reaction and the way he is in trouble is too much direct if you actually focus a little more time and give it a low little more time even month then your chapter will be great you made 21 chapters but the whole chapter length is only 7 hours and something if you look at the shadow reaper the best of the best his has 15 chapters but the length is far from 15 to 16 to + 17 hours do you know the reason he takes months but he dedicate even others also dedicate they take months but dedicate and write carefully they don't want their viewers to get a bad feeling for the weight that is why they take as much as time look at me I have not posted in month still my viewers are waiting because they trust me that my chapter will be very good that is the reason I am very much in frustation how to make it good and that is why your chapter is direct that is why you are reads are not even going 1K in a single chapter
