Safia

Hey you should check out my book "Secret Lies." :) I just posted chapter 11.

Thank you so much for your constructive critique! :)

Thanks for adding Zed to your library, hope you enjoy it, and that the continuous groaning doesn't keep you up...

@sperare - I guess that would be a pretty good way to distract a guy. 

@girlanonymous No it's fine. Well, she thought she could distract him so she could escape. :l 

@sperare - It just doesn't make sense when the main character doesn't want to be on the date in the first place, and she suddenly kisses him?
          
          This is purely my opinion, hope it doesn't offend you...

I saw your comment on my story, and I'm wondering... why do you think it's better if he kissed her? Just curious. :) 

Yes! I would love some covers! Thanks for asking :)

Sure, and it's almost kill. LOL. :) I hope you do come back and check my story out though. 

ya i have ....i'LL send my chaps written so for to edit