girlofglass02

rest in peace maggie smith, you will always be remembered as a strong and wonderful icon ♥

thefidgetypoet

SUGGESTION!
          
          Hello!!  
          I read your poems. Your book is beautiful. But, I have a suggestion to give. I am sorry in advance if you feel as if I am judging you in a wrong way.  As a reader, the first thought that came into my mind was that your thoughts could be exaggerated and could be written more. I think you should try to write some exaggerated poems. The best option to gather more words and information is to read other's poems as well. So that, whenever you start writing for yourself, you should be aware of the choices of words and everything. Don't exactly write the same lines but try to give it a twist in your own way and in your own words. Add your own creativity!☺️✨
          
          If you would like to read my work.. I'll share with you. 
          Maybe you would be able to relate to it too!! 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/364629850?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=thefidgetypoet
          
          Thankyou!! 
          Keep it up & keep writing!! 

thefidgetypoet

@girlofglass02 it's okay..keep writing and I hope you would make it to the bestt!!
            Thankyou soo much for the compliment!!✨✨
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girlofglass02

@thefidgetypoet hi! thanks for the feedback, yeah folklore isn't my best work cause i just wrote everything there in one afternoon and didn't edit anything. it was kind of just a mind dump if you know what i mean. thank you so much for the feedback, it really means a lot to me :) sure i'd be happy to check out your book, it looks amazing!! :D
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girlofglass02

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ok i need to say this because i've been hearing a lot of shit about it lately and i'm soo angry about it; being who you are is not something you have to change. it actually doesn't matter who you're attracted to or what your gender is. that is not a 'sin' and it's not something you need to 'fix'. just making sure everyone knows this, alright? love you just as you are<3