@hls218 Lol, thanks so much. (: well, I don't really know what to give you but i'll read over it again and then i'll try help, but i doubt i'll be any help. (:
i've been reading your story, "strip for me baby," and i really like it(:
i haven't written in a long time, i deleted all my stories.
i need tips on how to fix up my new ones.