gisellemjd

PLZ REAAAD IT IS CRUCIALLY IMPORTAANT!!!
          	Hey y'all
          	I'm sorry for not being around these weeks. I mean like there is so much going on around me that I have to fix and it is a heavy burden on me...
          	I hope you understand.
          	And secondly:
          	I know maybe my story is boring but im trying so hard to make it interesting. And as I told u guys, I had very few experiences in writing and this is literally my first book. That is why if u guys might know any way of helping me out plz share 
          	Love u guys and take care
          	Giselle

gisellemjd

PLZ REAAAD IT IS CRUCIALLY IMPORTAANT!!!
          Hey y'all
          I'm sorry for not being around these weeks. I mean like there is so much going on around me that I have to fix and it is a heavy burden on me...
          I hope you understand.
          And secondly:
          I know maybe my story is boring but im trying so hard to make it interesting. And as I told u guys, I had very few experiences in writing and this is literally my first book. That is why if u guys might know any way of helping me out plz share 
          Love u guys and take care
          Giselle

gisellemjd

hey guys
          how are y'all doin?
          I hope you guys are having an awesome time in ur lives.
          And in 2 weeks it it christmas. yaaaay lol
          Anyways i wont be updating this week bcz its my moms birthday and yeah.
          Thats it.
          Well love y'all 
          Giselle❤

MadiLuvCandi

Hey there Giselle!
          
          I really like your story it's off to a very interesting start.I know this is your first book on wattpad but whenever you have the time can you please separate the dialogue because I got thrown off and it's all together and just one other thing when someone is talking if you want it can be like " " but it's better that way.
          
          It'll make your book much much better xxx

gisellemjd

@MadiLuvCandi I fixed my problem. U can come check if u'd like. Thank u so much for ur advice. I really appreciate it and u were right: it did make my story a lot better☺❤
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gisellemjd

@MadiLuvCandi ok thanks for the advice and support
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gisellemjd

Hey guys! Its me Giselle. Please like, vote and comment on my story 'Angels can fly'. Its my first time writing so I may have some grammatical errors but I'll try my best not to. In return, I would follow back and read your stories. Thanks guys!❤