Hello! I’m new at wattpad and I’m writing a story called “survivor mode on”. If you don’t mind, could you check it out? Be honest with me and tell me my mistakes and things I can do to make the story better. Thank you!
https://my.w.tt/9kGDeGuZ5O
gEt out. the compAss lies. they don't control you. get out. the compaSs lies. They don't control you. the compass lIeS. they don't control yoU. get out. the comPass lies. they don't control you.
EAST IS UP
(yes, i am pumped for oct. 5)
how i n f i n i t e is space
and who
decides your f a t e
why everything will
d i s s o l v e into sand
how to avoid d e f e a t
when
t r u t h and f i c t i o n meet
why
nothing ever
turns out
as she planned
t•h•i•n•g•s •i• d•o•n•t u•n•d•e•r•s•t•a•n•d
4:56
coldplay 2005
tie me to a t r e e
tie my h a n d s above
my h e a d
s i n g a song to me
sing a song
like what you said
cause they're gonna m u r d e r me
they're gonna
take me d o w n
something
i c r u m b l e down
come s p i t at us
come
and throw your w e i g h t around
come
and f i g h t with us
come and
r o c k me to the ground
m•u•r•d•e•r
5:34
coldplay 2003
Np I'm gonna be busy the rest of this week so I'm trying to fit Wattpad time in when I can and that includes catching up on your story so I can be ready for the update!
where do we go
to draw the l i n e?
i've gotta say
i wasted all your
t i m e
honey honey
where do I go to
fall from g r a c e
G O D put a
s m i l e
upon your face
now when you work it out
i'm
w o r s e than you
yeah when you work it out
i wanted to
now when you work out
where
to d r a w the line
your
g u e s s
is as good as mine
g•o•d p•u•t •a• s•m•i•l•e u•p•o•n y•o•u•r f•a•c•e
4:57
coldplay 2003
Haha thank you! I've been mixing my account up a lot lately and since I haven't been reading many Wattpad stories, I stumbled "Before You Wake." I gotta say it's really been fantastic so far!
Also, yes, I live and breathe coldplay.
so we r o d e down to the river
where the
t o i l i n g ghosts spring
for their
c u r s e s to be broken
we'd go underneath the a r c h e s
where the w i t c h e s
are in the saying
there are
g h o s t t o w n s in the ocean
the ocean
G O D is in the houses
and G O D is in my head
and all the
c e m e t e r i e s in london
i see G O D
come in my garden
but
i don't know what he s a i d
for my heart
it wasn't o p e n
not open
c•e•m•e•t•e•r•i•e•s o•f l•o•n•d•o•n
3:21
coldplay 2008
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