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Like I said, I'm working on the rewrite for my Gally fic and lowkey why did anyone read that shit. . . There is no romantic build up, no characterization through dialogue and actions, and just overall weak writing. Like what do you mean Minny woke up from a coma and Clint jsut let her leave? Like what? And there are so many story inconsistencies because I began this before the major lore of before the Maze was dropped.
Oh my lord, thank you to all that read it, but just know I am fixing these things so hopeuflly the story will flow better and make more sense.