gwyneirax

Hey! I just read your oneshot, and I just wanted tell you that you've a great potential but in my opinion you could've definitely make the characters have much more personality alongwith slowing down the pace of story resulting the readers to connect with characters and feel the emotions. Btw you can ignore my opinion completely, it's just I think no potential should go wasted and you have such a great potential. Keep going!!

gwyneirax

@glimmermelody you're most welcome ♡♡♡
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glimmermelody

@gwyneirax Hey, thank you so much for taking the time to read my oneshot and share your thoughts  I really appreciate your honest feedback. I understand what you mean about giving the characters more personality and slowing the pace and I’ll definitely work on that in my future writing. It means a lot that you see potential in me, and your words genuinely motivated me. Thank you so much again for being so kind and supportive .
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kouxiinks

Heyaa, I hope you're doing well. 
          
          
          If you love to read cute romantic story with a tinge of mischief and banters please give a try to my book "Falling For Her". The book is completed and I hope it won't disappoint you and you'll enjoy reading it !! 
          
          
          Thank you and sorry if I disturbed you but please do give it a read whenever you're free !! 
          
          
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