Mariyakim14

Hey there! I just checked out your book, and I have to say, you’ve got a great start here! The story has a lot of potential, and I can see the effort you’ve put into it. With a few improvements, it could really shine even brighter!
          
          One area to focus on is the dialogue—it could use a bit more polish to make it sound more natural and engaging. Improving dialogue flow can really bring your characters to life and draw readers into the story even more.
          
          If you’re interested in a full review with more detailed feedback, feel free to stop by my review shop! I’d be happy to help you dive into specifics and work on strengthening your book even more.
          
          Keep up the great work! You’ve got this!

glitterglossI

Thank you so much for reading, voting and your feedback! It’s much appeciated dear! ❤️
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kimtaedaddie

Hey bae <33
          
          I wrote a new fanfic, ‘Innocence’ and would loveee if you could be one of my readers :)
          
          Any feedback/comments would be so appreciated my love!! 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/375941426?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=kimtaedaddie

glitterglossI

Thank you for sharing. ^^
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VickyLory8

Sorry for posting on your mb but could you pls check out my story if you have time. Sorry if this sounds like a bother.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/372089369?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=VickyLory8

glitterglossI

You write well, interesting concept. ^^
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VickyLory8

@VickyLory8 Sure, but can you pls tell me what you think of my story.
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glitterglossI

It’s no bother. ^^ You can also check mine if you like. 
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