Hey there! I just checked out your book, and I have to say, you’ve got a great start here! The story has a lot of potential, and I can see the effort you’ve put into it. With a few improvements, it could really shine even brighter!
One area to focus on is the dialogue—it could use a bit more polish to make it sound more natural and engaging. Improving dialogue flow can really bring your characters to life and draw readers into the story even more.
If you’re interested in a full review with more detailed feedback, feel free to stop by my review shop! I’d be happy to help you dive into specifics and work on strengthening your book even more.
Keep up the great work! You’ve got this!